VERBOSITY

Verbosity means wordiness. 

Wordy writing is bad. A reader faced with too many words may give up. Eliminate verbosity from your writing. 

These are instances of verbose expressions and their possible rewrites.

1.Take into consideration that(why not, consider that)

2. If you want to save on time(why not, to save time)

3. As it stands right now(why not, as it stands)

4. This is over and above other ideas you might consider( why not, also consider)

5. You may want to put a gasket( why not, put a gasket)

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